Flash Fiction: The Perfect Gift
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wyld_dandelyonIliaran and his twin, Illio, were headed to pay a visit to their mother on the event of the anniversary of her birth. They had brushed their mossy hair and beards carefully, and wore proper, mushroom-hats, new ones with no need for mending. Iliaran had even put on clothes with no paint spatters.
Illio carried a basket of pastries flavored with honeysuckle dew. “And what do you propose to give our Mother?” he asked.
“The pastries aren’t from both of us?”
The tiny, wrinkled elf scowled fiercely. “I made these while you were playing around.”
“I wasn’t playing, I was painting!”
“So, why didn’t you bring her a painting?”
Iliaran had been unsatisfied with his efforts, but wasn’t about to admit it. “Because we were bringing pastries!”
Illio just rolled his eyes, then stepped sideways three times, and vanished.
“That’s right, rush off to see her by yourself. We were supposed to go together!” Iliaran cried, stomping his foot.
As usual, that did no good at all. Iliaran started to look around, hoping for Inspiration. Just outside the wood were some very nice flowers—human-planted, of course, but that made them exotic. They were, of course, quite large, but that could be fixed. He set off toward them, walking to and fro, looking at them from different angles.
Finally, he settled on one. The petals were a deep pink, with shadows verging on majenta, and each one was perfectly shaped, with no flaws. He walked over and shook the stem, hard, and smiled, pleased that the petals all remained perfectly placed, and the scent was heavenly.
But then something green appeared in the center of the flower. “What do you think you’re doing?” said the frog.
“What are you doing in my flower?” asked Iliaran.
“Your flower?” The green frog’s face twisted with astonishment.
“Well, my mother’s flower. At least, it will be when I give it to her. This flower is perfect. There’s not a single insect nibble—“
“Well, I should think not,” said the frog. “This is my flower, and insects who venture close become my dinner.”
“Oh, thank you!”
“For what?”
“For keeping this flower perfect, so I could give it to my mother!”
“You don’t understand. This is my home. I keep it perfect for me.”
“Oh.”
A fly came buzzing near Iliaran’s head, and the frog effortlessly grabbed it with a very long tongue. He swallowed, and smiled.
“Well, you could move!”
“OK, then I’ll shrink you along with the flower!”
“Oh, no, that wouldn’t do at all. I’d be smaller than my prey. How would I eat?”
“Well, could I buy the flower from you?”
“With what?”
“Um, gold?” Iliaran reached into his pocket and pulled out a handful of shiny coins.
“Gold is no use to me, even if it were real, and wouldn’t vanish with the sunrise.” The frog’s tongue snapped out again, and again he swallowed happily. “I was thinking about something really worthwhile. Eternal life, good health, true love.”
“Oh, my talents don’t run to anything like that!” Iliaran drooped, rather spectacularly. His lips tended downward, and his shoulders dropped, his hands hung past his knees, and even the tips of his ears hung low.
“Then what are your talents?”
Iliaran brightened. “I paint!” He reached into the between and pulled out an easel, a fresh canvass, and paints. “I could trade you a portrait of yourself in your home. Then you could remember this flower long after it wilts.”
The frog made another skeptical face, but Iliaran ignored it, setting to work with the paints. And as he watched his home bloom on the canvas, the frog started to smile. In a remarkably short time, a perfectly-rendered flower with a smiling frog reclining on one of the petals was done. Iliaran waved his hand over it, muttering a bit of magic to dry it.
“It’s quite good!” The frog admired himself in the painting. “Quite good indeed.”
“Then it’s a deal?”
“No, I didn’t say that. I really have no use for a painting, you know. Besides, you made me too pretty. My girlfriend might be jealous.”
“I can fix that!” Iliaran whipped out the palette and a paintbrush.
“No!” The frog’s tongue was suddenly holding the paintbrush away from the canvas. “It would not improve the painting!” The frog’s speech was quite clear, even with his tongue out, though he let go of the paintbrush once Iliaran’s attention returned to him.
“That’s true. But then, how am I to buy your home?”
“You don’t need to.”
“But—“
“That painting is a very worthy gift indeed, and was made with your own hands.”
“Yes, it’s the best painting I’ve done all day. Maybe all week!” Iliaran started to dance and whistle.
“So, go on with you then. You’re scaring away my dinner.”
“Huh?” Iliaran stopped.
“Pack up your paints, pick up yon gift, and get thee hence to your mother!”
“Oh, yeah!” Iliaran tucked the art supplies between again, and picked up the painting, started to walk, but stopped and turned. “Thank you! You’ve been a most gracious host, and a wonderful model!” He bowed and left, still whistling.
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This story, like the first Iliaran and Illio story, The Big Blue Tent, was inspired by a photo posted by Jay Lake. This one was taken by S. Lake.
If you can afford to sponsor me, that would be very much appreciated! And whether you can do that or not, please let me know you dropped by, and what you thought.
Illio carried a basket of pastries flavored with honeysuckle dew. “And what do you propose to give our Mother?” he asked.
“The pastries aren’t from both of us?”
The tiny, wrinkled elf scowled fiercely. “I made these while you were playing around.”
“I wasn’t playing, I was painting!”
“So, why didn’t you bring her a painting?”
Iliaran had been unsatisfied with his efforts, but wasn’t about to admit it. “Because we were bringing pastries!”
Illio just rolled his eyes, then stepped sideways three times, and vanished.
“That’s right, rush off to see her by yourself. We were supposed to go together!” Iliaran cried, stomping his foot.
As usual, that did no good at all. Iliaran started to look around, hoping for Inspiration. Just outside the wood were some very nice flowers—human-planted, of course, but that made them exotic. They were, of course, quite large, but that could be fixed. He set off toward them, walking to and fro, looking at them from different angles.
Finally, he settled on one. The petals were a deep pink, with shadows verging on majenta, and each one was perfectly shaped, with no flaws. He walked over and shook the stem, hard, and smiled, pleased that the petals all remained perfectly placed, and the scent was heavenly.
But then something green appeared in the center of the flower. “What do you think you’re doing?” said the frog.“What are you doing in my flower?” asked Iliaran.
“Your flower?” The green frog’s face twisted with astonishment.
“Well, my mother’s flower. At least, it will be when I give it to her. This flower is perfect. There’s not a single insect nibble—“
“Well, I should think not,” said the frog. “This is my flower, and insects who venture close become my dinner.”
“Oh, thank you!”
“For what?”
“For keeping this flower perfect, so I could give it to my mother!”
“You don’t understand. This is my home. I keep it perfect for me.”
“Oh.”
A fly came buzzing near Iliaran’s head, and the frog effortlessly grabbed it with a very long tongue. He swallowed, and smiled.
“Well, you could move!”
Photo by S. Lake
“I don’t want to move.”“OK, then I’ll shrink you along with the flower!”
“Oh, no, that wouldn’t do at all. I’d be smaller than my prey. How would I eat?”
“Well, could I buy the flower from you?”
“With what?”
“Um, gold?” Iliaran reached into his pocket and pulled out a handful of shiny coins.
“Gold is no use to me, even if it were real, and wouldn’t vanish with the sunrise.” The frog’s tongue snapped out again, and again he swallowed happily. “I was thinking about something really worthwhile. Eternal life, good health, true love.”
“Oh, my talents don’t run to anything like that!” Iliaran drooped, rather spectacularly. His lips tended downward, and his shoulders dropped, his hands hung past his knees, and even the tips of his ears hung low.
“Then what are your talents?”
Iliaran brightened. “I paint!” He reached into the between and pulled out an easel, a fresh canvass, and paints. “I could trade you a portrait of yourself in your home. Then you could remember this flower long after it wilts.”
The frog made another skeptical face, but Iliaran ignored it, setting to work with the paints. And as he watched his home bloom on the canvas, the frog started to smile. In a remarkably short time, a perfectly-rendered flower with a smiling frog reclining on one of the petals was done. Iliaran waved his hand over it, muttering a bit of magic to dry it.
“It’s quite good!” The frog admired himself in the painting. “Quite good indeed.”
“Then it’s a deal?”
“No, I didn’t say that. I really have no use for a painting, you know. Besides, you made me too pretty. My girlfriend might be jealous.”
“I can fix that!” Iliaran whipped out the palette and a paintbrush.
“No!” The frog’s tongue was suddenly holding the paintbrush away from the canvas. “It would not improve the painting!” The frog’s speech was quite clear, even with his tongue out, though he let go of the paintbrush once Iliaran’s attention returned to him.
“That’s true. But then, how am I to buy your home?”
“You don’t need to.”
“But—“
“That painting is a very worthy gift indeed, and was made with your own hands.”
“Yes, it’s the best painting I’ve done all day. Maybe all week!” Iliaran started to dance and whistle.
“So, go on with you then. You’re scaring away my dinner.”
“Huh?” Iliaran stopped.
“Pack up your paints, pick up yon gift, and get thee hence to your mother!”
“Oh, yeah!” Iliaran tucked the art supplies between again, and picked up the painting, started to walk, but stopped and turned. “Thank you! You’ve been a most gracious host, and a wonderful model!” He bowed and left, still whistling.
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This story, like the first Iliaran and Illio story, The Big Blue Tent, was inspired by a photo posted by Jay Lake. This one was taken by S. Lake.
If you can afford to sponsor me, that would be very much appreciated! And whether you can do that or not, please let me know you dropped by, and what you thought.
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Date: 2009-09-12 01:32 am (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 2009-09-12 04:48 am (UTC)Hmm...I should probably also do likewise with the hat photo.
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Date: 2009-09-12 04:54 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2009-09-12 05:14 am (UTC)Friday Flash
Date: 2009-09-12 01:53 am (UTC)Re: Friday Flash
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Date: 2009-09-12 01:16 pm (UTC)I was thinking I should branch out, do something different next week, something not quite so, well, Foodie Friend would say "sappy" I think.
But if the right photo comes along, there could well be more.
Sleepy mind to the Dandelyon -- You're talking to a photograpner, you know.
Sleepy Dandelyon to mind -- True. But I doubt Iliaran is visiting New Zealand any time soon.
Sleepy mind to the Dandelyon -- are you sure?
Sleepy Dandelyon -- hush, you'll give him ideas!
Sleepy mind, smiling -- that's my job.
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Date: 2009-09-12 08:47 pm (UTC)But if he does visit NZ, can you consider sending him to Rotorua? I'd love to see him visit one of the geothermal areas, perhaps to get some mud or water for healing someone (or to get it for the healer who ran out??). Or perhaps the mud or water would need to come from the (human-planted) redwood forest specifically, not the other geothermal pools in the area.
Or perhaps he could find reason to go to the glow worm caves? They aren't in Rotorua but are down that way so it's close enough.
I've got a few picts up at Webshots of Rotorua. I have a few others but haven't scanned them in, I think these are about the same (with one exception I can think of). I'll link them below so if you want to look when you're bored or not wanting to write you can take a quick tour.
page 3 of the NZ 2 North Island album
page 2 of the NZ 4 North Island album
and page 3 of the NZ 4 North Island album
And yes, if you get inspired by a photo and want to use it to post the story like you do you are welcome to do so.
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Date: 2009-09-14 08:38 am (UTC)They were resistant to being copied, though I'm guessing that would be fixed by signing up?
Definitely part of what I envision if I'm doing more wee folk stories is trying to use pictures that look at the world from their perspective.
I could imagine using some of the wider vistas for mood pics for Fireborn, though. I really should try to do some paintings of some of the characters.
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Date: 2009-09-14 08:57 am (UTC)Hmmm... for a world from the wee folk perspective one possibility is butterfly shadow.
And of course, if they don't work for you/work for this story there is nothing wrong with that. :) I'm trying to be helpful, I don't want you to feel obligated or that you can't say no. ;)
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Date: 2009-09-14 09:05 am (UTC)No promises as to what will actually inspire a story, of course, so I'm glad you aren't asking for them. The creative process is a mystery, still--or the heart of it is Mystery, and remains Mystery, no matter how many of the skill-mysteries I master.
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Date: 2009-09-12 10:27 am (UTC)Fixed!
Date: 2009-09-12 12:55 pm (UTC)There are days, especially when I'm not feeling well, that I wish Mystery would confine itself to religion, where it properly belongs, and leave both my computer and the internet alone!
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Date: 2009-09-12 01:34 pm (UTC)Nice job, and welcome to #fridayflash!
~netta50
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Date: 2009-09-12 04:19 pm (UTC)Welcome to #fridayflash!
Date: 2009-09-12 04:56 pm (UTC)Re: Welcome to #fridayflash!
Date: 2009-09-12 05:33 pm (UTC)#FridayFlash or #FridayFrog
Date: 2009-09-12 05:58 pm (UTC)Jeff Posey
Re: #FridayFlash or #FridayFrog
Date: 2009-09-12 06:52 pm (UTC)Loved It
Date: 2009-09-15 11:27 pm (UTC)The picture is terrific too.
~jon
http://www.jmstrother.com
Re: Loved It
Date: 2009-10-02 02:55 am (UTC)