I think you need just a few more words to make it completely clear what's happening. (Grace stabbed through her own hand into Stella's, and the magic took both of them, right?) I had to read carefully to get that, even though it's more or less what I was hoping for.
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Date: 2010-02-20 07:57 pm (UTC)