I like that you didn't immediately go the obvious direction. The feather is still there and Grace still has a little time to consider, to be honest with Stella, to give Stella the chance to love her enough to let her choose the flight adventure, if she wants that. I also like that the feather is waiting a chance to go find another dreamer--perhaps Stella? What would she do with the chance?
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Date: 2010-02-05 08:54 pm (UTC)Good story!