Excellent twist. Much more interesting way to take the story, than I was expecting.
In the twelve paragraph, I was confused as to which "she" was studying Tom. I had to look back a paragraph and re-read to decide for sure it was Jeri. Might be me being dense. It happens.
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Date: 2014-04-09 11:45 pm (UTC)In the twelve paragraph, I was confused as to which "she" was studying Tom. I had to look back a paragraph and re-read to decide for sure it was Jeri. Might be me being dense. It happens.