Congratulations on finishing something before Saturday! I can tell you have an affection for this world through your descriptions and the central relationship.
“Mother—I—we thought you a prisoner.”
“I was—I—“
I'm not certain how to read these lines. I think they're supposed to be read as stammering. In the LJ setup, the dashes are very long, though copying and pasting them shortens them up.
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Date: 2011-04-08 02:47 pm (UTC)“Mother—I—we thought you a prisoner.”
“I was—I—“
I'm not certain how to read these lines. I think they're supposed to be read as stammering. In the LJ setup, the dashes are very long, though copying and pasting them shortens them up.