Someone wrote in [personal profile] wyld_dandelyon 2009-10-06 03:28 am (UTC)

Well done. The predictable ending of her seeing to her own ending was nicely avoided. This providing a much more fulfilling and satisfying conclusion.

I think there may be one typo: To wonder, it is time?
Perhaps, To wonder, is it time?
~jon

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