Someone wrote in [personal profile] wyld_dandelyon 2010-06-06 04:11 am (UTC)

Loved it!

I could see where it was going, but liked the twist at the end. Her throwing the candy wrapper on the ground was a great detail and fits with the "monster" description.

Great job!

Cecilia Dominic
@RandomOenophile

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